You are viewing a single comment's thread from:RE: Sunday Sea Shanty - Following the StarsView the full contextView the direct parentportsundries (58)in Blockchain Poets • 2 years ago I try to stay some what free verse but these are excellent suggestions.
If there hadn't been the repetitions there already I wouldn't have suggested adding them in.
The bones of structure are already right there, you might find the exercise an interesting one to potter with.