You made me think of the precipitation cycle, with your juxtaposing of air/clouds/wind and water/waves/depths. water evaporates, forms clouds, blows winds, rains down, joins depths, pushes waves. it is a really pretty poem too!
You made me think of the precipitation cycle, with your juxtaposing of air/clouds/wind and water/waves/depths. water evaporates, forms clouds, blows winds, rains down, joins depths, pushes waves. it is a really pretty poem too!
Thank you, juxtaposing things are always fun when you get the right words in a poem.