Beautiful as ever, each word carefully chosen. I liked the ink in the rain which with the image of time is like a desert speaks to the impermanence of things. Did you try 'the memories fade away, the lyrics blur' I think it will follow nicely into the next line. I also really liked the contrasting images of the butterflies in the stomach and the mirrors that reflect sorrow. Your ending is impressive, asking us to reflect and avoids an obvious sentimental resolution. Overall a really well crafted, heart felt poem,
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Thank you very much for your comment, support and for stopping by my blog.
Your welcome, I think you have a very talented voice, keep writing :)