"Ages of commitment"
Significant emulsifies the need,
a crisis of the existence,
the yearning souls brushes upon each
other, to vanquish the dilemma,
insignificant bubbles arouse,
just to extend the time-lapse.
Breathtaking is the downpours,
after every round comes up another,
flush of memories entwine,
engulfing concepts alert the mind awake.
A gush of emotions lose control,
with time eases the burns.
Shaking visions endures,
what crashes, time caresses.
Bruises that thrush itself,
vanquishes along the way,
Time actualizes the facts,
overwrites the abrasions.
A commitment of time, over crosses
the prescribed offerings.
Atoned sublimations bygones
the forgiving soldier of the hour.
Limit the captions of the dark,
succumbs come along.
Praises of hour escape no limit,
such is the endorsement of age alit.
The End!
{Cover- Source}
Time actualizes the facts,
overwrites the abrasions
Wow!
This line made think of the fact in a different way.
Lovely!
Indeed a good read....
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Thank you so much @chrysanthemum. It is quite rare to see your comments these days. I am glad my words could make you think otherwise.
Yep!
You are right, I'm pretty busy with my little big learners. Currently I'm teaching KG kids.
Hoping to be regular with you guys.
Let's see....
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I fell in love with this phrase:
Very nice poem, you transported me in the literal time ☺, a hug ♥
I am glad you liked it.
I love the wordplay. Using bygones as a verb is weird and cool. Same with “over crosses”, which looks like it could have a double meaning. But I don’t understand the message or theme of this poem all that well, whether or not that’s a problem at all.
The theme is precisely pinpointing the role of time and commitment. How does it both work hand in hand, in our life.