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RE: travel to the beautiful city park of Pidie Jaya // enjoy the view, it must be very entertaining, the atmosphere is very pleasant.

in Worldmappin4 days ago

Hi Suarlex. I congratulate you for trying not to use as many duplicate photos as I suggested. Keep improving this and your writing to create more valuable posts. Short sentences that don't use the same words over and over are fine. If you're a little more concise, your post will be even better. More words in a post doesn't mean higher quality content.

Best regards!

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Thank you Auntie, I will continue to improve and make better posts in the future ❤️

Take this post, for example.

Her writing gets straight to the point about what she did in each place she visited. She doesn't add excessive emotion or repeat the same thing over and over. She recounts her experience of the trip.

The photographs are clear and all from different locations; one from each location is enough. Or maybe two or three to show a little more detail, but without going overboard. That's what we value in a good post!

I hope you can take this and improve it! I'm taking the time to tell you this because I see you're excited about Hive, and I want you to make the most of it. Since you're taking the time to write a post, make it the best it can be and make it valuable.

Ask me if you have any questions.

https://peakd.com/hive-186239/@livinguktaiwan/looking-for-george-and-my-all-time-favourite-duomo-in-milan-italy

Thank you very much aunty, I will definitely study it ❤️🙏