Hey @ifarmgirl. Really interesting piece here. It’s so thoughtful you spent your short time leaving them with good memories.
We giggled shortly, then as he carried me, I held him by the face, kissed him passionately one last time, whispered how much I love him, thanked him, wrapped my arms around him then fell asleep, never to wake up again.
This ending was so intense. Here gives a sweet moment that changes the entire course of his life.
Beautiful piece and good luck with the contest.
Thank you Sugar :) Glad you found it interesting :) The words just came through as I was tapping my keyboard hehe, but with some facts too, for the family spend time like that so it's awesome incorporate some of them :)