It was a good celebration: a spring party to celebrate the 50th edition of the Mizu No Oto. Thanking @marcoriccardi is, in a sense, redundant, because in well-connected groups giving thanks is sometimes unnecessary. Collective joy is enough ...
I was pleased with this renga. The initial encouragement of @marcoriccardi put the elements that they later affirmed at the outset. The image of the cherries was enough to suggest spring and nostalgia for the past. I loved the way the cherries were changing from green to red, how the birds came to eat them ... A sensation of sweetness and acidity was changed, which concentrated us in the mouth, inciting the vision of loving feelings, to end in the last haiku, from @naylet, in declared passion (I don't know how to read if in @marcoriccardi's haiku that couple of children were brothers, or friends who later became boyfriends).
I missed the haiku lovers who wrote in English, @gwilberiol represented them. In this regard, I would not like to be separated by language in future exercises, I do not think it necessary.
I hug everyone.
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