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It's a very captivating story. It must have been devastating for Poor Roger growing up with much resentment in his heart for a man he'd always believed to be responsible for his father's death but I'm glad Roger and Lydia finally got back together at the end.
Meanwhile, I need a friend like Morgan in my life. Lol
For why? It should be one of these reasons
You're the workaholic type
You have a resentment for someone or
You are looking for someone like Lydia to fall in love with
Which of them? 🙄
Just walking around sha, see ya 🚶♀️🚶♀️🚶♀️
I think most of your options, if not all, are right o. Lol
Mentor, it's been a while
😂 I'm almost totally right? Now I'm more curious, I hope the resentment for someone is the one that made it almost right 🙄 is nor good to have resentment for somebody o
Sometimes, it's good for our health o. Lol
🙄 What's he saying? If you like, resent me then you will see what it means to have good health 🤣🤣
Hehehe. I cannot resent you. My resentment is for someone else, the devil.
What an amazing story girl! I read it without missing a line and I love it that it was even longer 😂 the story has so much suspense and romance and anger too 🤭
Those two best friends are something else, well I'm glad Morgan planned all that for his friend Roger.
And then, the little fights between Lydia and Roger was so romantic and funny. They were sounding so much like they're in love from the beginning when they met each other.
It's so sad that Roger had such a resentment in his heart to Lydia's father not knowing he got it all wrong. It's a good thing the man cleared the whole thing and Roger got to live life better.
Nice story all the way, you're doing great dear. Can't wait to read another amazing story from you 😊
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STOPThis is a well-developed story. Throughout the twists and turns of the plot, the action is clear. The motivation of the different characters is clear. While it might have seemed improbable that Roger and Lydia would meet as many times as they do, Morgan acts to match the two up.
The complication of Lydia's father adds conflict to the story, conflict you resolve credibly. The last line is very good:
Thank you for sharing this entertaining story with the community, and thank you very much for being a positive presence in the community.
An attraction between two young people turns into a drama where unsuspected elements are revealed. But time, and the mediation of a friend, resolves the conflict.
You may want to check out the writing tips you can find on our home page and some you decide on to help you in crafting short stories.
How much time He spent in this irritation but happy to all the confusion ended at last;
Friends are the blessings and love fights hehe they are also precious.
You have composed a lengthy yet impactful story 💙
Stay blessed dear.
What an interesting story, I couldn't stop reading it :) Roger really deserves to have both the truth and a good life.
Very well written :)