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in The Ink Well3 years ago

This is a well-developed story. Throughout the twists and turns of the plot, the action is clear. The motivation of the different characters is clear. While it might have seemed improbable that Roger and Lydia would meet as many times as they do, Morgan acts to match the two up.

The complication of Lydia's father adds conflict to the story, conflict you resolve credibly. The last line is very good:

The peaceful beginning at the end of the story...

Thank you for sharing this entertaining story with the community, and thank you very much for being a positive presence in the community.