Nice work. I especially enjoyed the section which might be described as "frame narration". So many dream sequences are badly used in prose. I enjoyed yours. Keep it up. Be sure to leave a link in the comments of their main post.
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Glad you enjoyed it @almightymelon - when I read the prompt, it made me think about long travels and how much I get lost in my own thoughts, so I thought it might be interesting if most of the "story" essentially just took place in his thoughts.
Link added in the comments :) thanks for the reminder