Inherited ^° Dreemport challenge

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Kindness lunged when she saw a newborn crying. Before crossing the blood barrier. Fear inhibited her forcefully.
"Don't indulge Yourself in each matter."
She pulled her back and but emotional kindness hurried to strike out the bloodstream. Multiple voices were heard. Everyone spoke in opposition. Because of her quickness they always had to face complications. She scrambled to the brain to rescue this kid. Brain glanced at her ruthlessly. She requested no new amassing problems this time. But my brain didn't believe her words. Within seconds Ali grabbed his phone and got busy in chit chat. Kindness dwelled in the heart silently loneliness in the prison.

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Entering his bungalow Ali found gutted seated in the lounge . He moved to his room as he didn't want to encounter a heathen question. Courtesy endeavored to intervene but again the brain dismissed her presence. Aforesaid memories implied the last time he accompanied their gathering. Questions regarding his career annoyed him. No one attended to the psychological sickness he had . No expectations from these business oriented minds that they are not human. Taking out his phone and he started scrolling trends, in minutes he purchased new things from an online store . Mind interfered to stop him "only waste of money". cabinet filled with clothes, shoes and costly gadgets, vestigial because of disuse. Heart rescinded this decision.
"Your parents have a lot of money ,it's all yours" You are only one for whom these luxuries and money are related to.At that moment, he received texts from a friend regarding the submission of an assignment. Lie jumped to save him. Brain got busy formulating the story. He texted Anaya How are you? Conversation turned on, His brain played with words. Emotions were on reserved mode. Heart remained unattendant at this moment as this was the only deal. He proposed his matter-of-fact .She couldn't refute him. As she loved him. Closing his eyes, he thought about how sharp he was. Everyone was applauding the brain. Heart overlooked this ceremony. He felt cold.Honesty, kindness, love, courtesy, mercy, everyone started shivering now.

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Time flew away Ali was a prosperous businessman as his father dreamed. He had a promising reputation for making straight decisions. Sharp brain. Parties were brandished each day in the central nervous system. Everyone regarded the instructions as he had everything under his supervision. Everyday things get more complicated for the heart. No access to bestow optimistic thoughts to Ali. Heart became forgiven where each good trait resided but took its last breaths in deprivation and slighter attention.

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Sofia immigrated into his life.Love was the only prisoner who got liberty from enclosures. Brain played this card to receive attention and fame. After marriage Ali provided enough love to Sophia. But after a while love was again propelled to the heart with torn attire and illness. Brain targeted it badly. But this time heart put up with an oath that he will deliver all of them somewhere.

But will he persist alive with this victorious mind but a deceased heart.

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Cell division commenced, and the Lord instructed traits to change their home. 23 chromosomes were authorized to assort independently. Brain expected to send all his alliances to make the daughter cell successful.But the heart unlocked the cage and discharged everyone. So vulnerable and subtle. Heart petitioned them to showcase their proficiency because they had to endure this struggle. To upset the natural selection. They were less competent. They took a lot of transitions in their struggle. No one knew which one was going to be characterized in the offspring. Sidra was the cute infant who remade the feelings of her grandparents. They gave her each facility because she was the only kid after the death of Ali. She had diverse qualities. The traits inherited by Ali didn't persisted in her mind only but she provided all the supervision to her heart. Courteous, kind, passionate and loving Sidra amazed everyone as she assisted everyone. No discrimination of cast, money or looks. She depicted emotions everywhere. Sofia was surprised too, her chromosomes didn't have such capability. From where she inherited such genes. Ali was smiling somewhere as

his heart was still alive and Sidra inherited it .

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Feels like when I was in Science class @ayesha-malik hahahahaha!!! Lovely storyline!!!
Best results are experienced when the heart is in sync with the logic portion of Mr. Brain lol!
Is "Emotions we're on reserved mode" supposed to be "Emotions were on reserved mode?"
Is "bangllow" supposed to be "bungalow?"
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Haha hopefully you have enjoyed this science class 😉 Mr.Brain needs everything to be logical . If my heart says eat chocolate I need justification apart from saying "my heart wants " 😂
Thanks for the guideline mistakes do happen when you are having sleepy eyes 🤣 you have opened my eyes .

Incredible writing Ayesha 💗 You blew me away with this one❣️ The tussle between heart and mind is often there for humanity. This is clever writing. I am glad that the heart survived !PIZZA !ALIVE !LUV

Heart survived only for transferring these good traits. In the difficult situation where mind gas all the success, heart was near to the death. Ali was expired but his good heart was inherited to Sidra 💖
Thanks a lot for the appreciation 😊 this means a lot to me 🥰

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You relate biology as a literary story. Something out of the ordinary.....

Perhaps many people do not understand and get lost.

I would suggest you include some conversation between the actors or protagonists of the story.

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I guess chromosomes are known by many of us but yes I have to give a little bit of insight to the readers.
I respect your suggestion, don't know why I can't include the conversation maybe I am not much proficient in writing
Thanks for the feedback ❤

The personification of biological processes is a clever approach to the prompt, 'Inheritance'. The chromosomes, the heart, the brain...you introduce your 'characters' as though they are willful actors. Perhaps, in a way, they are. Certainly metaphorically there is the will for survival of the fittest.

Thank you for sharing this interesting story with the Ink Well community. We appreciate your support of other authors.

The conflict between heart and brain while taking a decision changes the personality of a person. I took the theme that " traits are always inherited but environment and society make them dominant or recessive". Good brains are not always successful if the goodness of heart is rejected.
Thanks for your appreciation.

Timely writing. This type of writing will boost the morale of other writers. Well written Congratulations.

Although I was afraid to write because the community rules are a little bit strict 😁 discarded 3 stories and this is the 4th and final one.
Thanks for your presence.

Wow, a literal "War of Hearts ad Mind" !

Read in a comment this is your 4th masterpiece glad you were able to post it!

Hehe, it's not easy to win this war. In many cases mind wins and feelings are ruined
Thanks for the feedback dear💗

my pleasure...

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