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RE: Inherited ^° Dreemport challenge

in The Ink Well3 years ago

You relate biology as a literary story. Something out of the ordinary.....

Perhaps many people do not understand and get lost.

I would suggest you include some conversation between the actors or protagonists of the story.

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I guess chromosomes are known by many of us but yes I have to give a little bit of insight to the readers.
I respect your suggestion, don't know why I can't include the conversation maybe I am not much proficient in writing
Thanks for the feedback ❤