Awwwww. What a way to find love. I was intrigued by your story, I honestly loved it. Perhaps (just a suggestion), you might want to read Inkwells Catalogue of Fiction Writing Tips because it'll help you construct your story more beautiful. You already write beautifully just some finishing touches.
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This story has an interesting structure. It is almost told in frames that give us a visual impression of what is occurring in each life. Peter on one hand, spitting out tea and walking his dog. Zoe on the other hand, finishing her work and avoiding Peter. They all meet coincidentally and there is a 'knockout'. Whether or not Zoe and Peter form a personal relationship that develops, doesn't matter. They have met and become friends. One might say Ziggler is the glue that held them together.
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They talked at length, finding solace in the moment and were only interrupted by Ziggler who threw himself in-between the two after wincing for quite a while without attention.
I loved your story and most of all after reading this sentence I imagined that I wanted a dog and that it would jump between me and my future wife. This was a very warm and very enjoyable story. Congratulations to you.
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Zoe literally fell for Peter. A delightful, feelgood tale.
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What an entertaining and funny story, with very good hilarious moments. Now Zoe will be more in love with Peter after those good times.
Awwwww. What a way to find love. I was intrigued by your story, I honestly loved it. Perhaps (just a suggestion), you might want to read Inkwells Catalogue of Fiction Writing Tips because it'll help you construct your story more beautiful. You already write beautifully just some finishing touches.
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This story has an interesting structure. It is almost told in frames that give us a visual impression of what is occurring in each life. Peter on one hand, spitting out tea and walking his dog. Zoe on the other hand, finishing her work and avoiding Peter. They all meet coincidentally and there is a 'knockout'. Whether or not Zoe and Peter form a personal relationship that develops, doesn't matter. They have met and become friends. One might say Ziggler is the glue that held them together.
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I loved your story and most of all after reading this sentence I imagined that I wanted a dog and that it would jump between me and my future wife. This was a very warm and very enjoyable story. Congratulations to you.
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