I am so happy to have you among the participants!
The story seems to me a kind of Animal Farm extended to the wild world, and it's very nice! Nice idea of making a frame story instead of a consequential ending ... but above all I really envy you the separator with ostriches! 😂
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Ha ha, yes that separator is 'the dogs bollocks'. I wanted to see if all my photoshop learning from back in the steem dayz was still there. Seems it is like riding a bike.
Glad you enjoyed the story, and you're right it does have a tang of Animal Farm with the bull and his stream of rhetoric. I was conscious that it might mimic AF a little as I was writing it but I couldn't think of an better active way to get back story across while moving it forward through dialogue. Show don't tell and all that guff 😂
Nice to see the FTS back and inspiring writers on hive 👍