In a shaded city London, in a noble house, we are during one night several of us academic, doctors, scientists, of the shaded room, the moon and the stars were moving away from our sight; but the prediction and the evocation of the evil could not be excluded debating up to where it is possible to look for the truth of the things, so much it was the abortion between the debatientes, where salea to reduce a scientist and philosopher, so-called Marco Colín contributing the curiosity is a very wide suspense, but all the phenomena you have his explanation it causes and effect, they bring him over and he asks him how he would explain the paranormal thing, the bogeys and spectrums, it is a product of the imagination or myths. Our gentleman did not have a restored absolute since the truth is not absolute, but everything has his explanation, to to listen to his restored one quite the presents, he informs him the following thing that is arranged of obtaining this truth, communicates to them that it is arranged to all by the truth and the science, good contribution mister Marco, we have one series of contingencies in several parts of the world, we finance a trip in the search of the truth of these done mysteriously for the man, our modest gentleman accepts this passage.
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Hello @coolxxx,
Your story has a lyric quality, which is in stark contrast to the content:
These are some examples of the extreme violence contained in your story. You are writing about evil, and these details express evil. So that is appropriate for your story. However, it is not appropriate for the Ink Well community. In our Manifesto we state:
Your pictures did not come through. They are usually quite impressive, so that is regrettable.
You have ideas and they are worth sharing, but please refer to the Manifesto when you write for us. Thank you.
Thank you :)
I see that you changed the story but there are references to killing children, and a peasant burned and dragged by a turtle. This horrible, legendary creature is evil and grotesque. Violence is its essence. I don't think you could change the story enough to fit the Ink Well culture. However, I appreciate the changes you have made, and the images you have drawn are quite unique. I personally upvoted them and gave you a tip. It really wouldn't do to have the Ink Well upvote the story. If you read our manifesto (as I quoted to you in the previous comment--yes, that was me, writing as Ink Well) you will see that the violence and gore do not fit in the Ink Well. I wish you well. You have an amazing imagination.Hello @coolxxx,