Deep in the constant reality of our dreams holds the mare of the night, multiple interpretations and confusing explanations eat up one's thought in the real world as one tries to give meanings to the subconscious experience. The reality of the subconscious experience is the fact that we would have to stay tuned to our life experiences to get tangible pieces to connect together for better understanding of the subconscious experience and how they relate to the real world.
I fell asleep on the hook of trying to survive the panic and loud experience of adulthood as I lay down on my bed the previous night, thoughts of self development and expansion had crossed through my mind from different angles leading me into the deeper side of my subconsciousness.
I Found myself walking through a market place filled with people who were exchanging clothes for money,
Everyone seem to be on the verge of selling off their clothes as people pulled off their clothes to market them for sale , buyers would cross to another side of the market connected by a long bridge accessible to the buyers leaving behind those who had sold their clothes to them.
out of curiosity I had to check myself to confirm if i still had my clothes on me even though I could barely understand what was going on.
Buyers and sellers bid for prices , "too cheap, too expensive" I heard as they argue with each other in other to get to price conclusion, Many had sold out their clothes and had nothing on them. "no one can see me" I said quietly
"Hey dear, you're putting on nice clothes, i will pay a thousand pounds for the shirt" a buyer said as he walked up to me, in confusion I asked if he could see me , he answered that he could see me clearly, yes my clothes were nice but the buyer had no nice clothe on him, whenever I tried to ask why he wanted to buy my shirt with such a huge amount and why he had no nice clothes on, my voice would go on mute mode and no one would answer me, not even those selling off their clothes.
"Well, maybe it's a rule here " I said to myself. again the vendor asked if I could sell my shirt for a thousand pound, I answered "yes" but only if I could know why he was interested in my shirt and why he was willing to pay such a huge amount.
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Thank you for sharing this story with us. You create the scene well, and pull us into your narrative quickly. However, this piece does not have essential elements of a story structure.Hello @gbemidwolf,
A story has a definite arc. It starts, presents a conflict, and then resolves the conflict. Here you have the scene, and the beginning of a conflict--where is he? can he be seen? should he sell his clothes?--but not one that is clearly defined. Also, you leave off without a resolution. What happens? Does he sell his clothes? Does he wake up? Does he find he has been robbed? Perhaps he has been drugged and that's why he has this dream?
You can see the possibilities. It is the author's job in a story to answer the questions. We have a post that offers tips on how to write a story in the traditional sense. In this 'tip' post you will find clearly explained the elements of a story arc.
You have an interesting perspective and something to say. These are essential ingredients in story writing. Please write again and try to use the tips in our post as an approximate guide.
Have a great Sunday.
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