I was wondering if this was your wedding story. I am so glad you have it in your mind because if you wish for it with all your might and visualize it in your mind it will all come true. I think the conflict part of the story was missing. You know, the spice, that someone unexpectedly shows up at the wedding, someone who sneaks in and wants to eat and drink for free, hehehe.
Very nice ;-)
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Yes, as I mentioned, since I didn't write an adventure story, I didn't think of adding conflict, I just wrote my dream and in my dream, it was perfect and smooth.
Thank you for reading @jadams2k18