I'm so glad you liked my story. Thanks for the tips and links, I will read it. You are right, it never occurred to me to add conflict because I was writing with a bit of excitement, it would attract the reader more. I will take this into account in my next posts.😊🌸
In reality, @arduilcelebren and I are engaged and will get married next year. This story actually reflects my dreams a little bit🤗. I wrote about our future wedding and @arduilcelebren liked it very much.
That is wonderful, @ipexito! I'm so happy for you both. May your wedding be as blissful and perfect as your story!
Thank you very much @jayna , I hope it will be so beautiful and joyful🌸🌸
I was wondering if this was your wedding story. I am so glad you have it in your mind because if you wish for it with all your might and visualize it in your mind it will all come true. I think the conflict part of the story was missing. You know, the spice, that someone unexpectedly shows up at the wedding, someone who sneaks in and wants to eat and drink for free, hehehe.
Very nice ;-)
Yes, as I mentioned, since I didn't write an adventure story, I didn't think of adding conflict, I just wrote my dream and in my dream, it was perfect and smooth.
Thank you for reading @jadams2k18