Thank you! I love your input very much.
One tip: In this like, it is Cinthia speaking, but it is her sister that is concerned she has made a mistake. You might want to edit that.
I don't know what you mean. Cinthia is the narrator of the story, however, she doesn't take action until her sister confirms that she is also worried when she realizes that her prince charming is not as perfect as she imagined (he smoked and stuff).
o.O?