I really enjoyed your story, @balikis95. I was cheering Eleanor on as she navigated the darkness by the light of the necklace!
I had trouble visualizing the dangling floor boards:
... she turned right to where the light from the necklace points as she saw tons of loose boards in her path dangling at the top of a mist. She didn't like the idea of climbing it a bit, but then she thought, "What if the loose board was a hidden passageway like mother had said?"
I would have loved some more detail to help understand what she had to climb. And how she did so while carrying her brother. How does she know they are floor boards if they are dangling in the air?
But it's a good story, and it's so nice to see your writing skills developing so beautifully!
Thank you @jayna, it is very good to see you here as I am trying to do better in this. The correction made is taken note of and I will explore more on it. Thank you.