You have an interesting writing style, @dele02. You might want to read some of the other stories in The Ink Well community to see how short stories are usually formatted. Typically, they are not centered. Dialog is in quotes. And the actions are written in regular prose, not as if a screenplay writer is informing a director about the staging of actors. :-)
Be sure to get to know our community and our rules. For example, we ask everyone who posts in The Ink Well to read and comment on at least two other stories in the community for every post published. And we have some excellent tips for fiction writers who are just starting out. You can find them in our catalog of fiction writing tips.
Good luck and keep writing!