Families are complicated, and many parents have high expectations of their children that don't match what they really want from life. Your story captured that well.
Please be sure to make use of our catalog of fiction writing tips. I recommend the article Help for the Grammatically Challenged, which provides tips for using Google Docs to draft your posts. You can do this on a PC or a smart phone. Google Docs will point out errors in grammar and wording choice, which you can then fix by clicking on them.
Do so could really help you with the quality of your posts. Good luck and keep writing!