Thank you for reading me and giving me such an important suggestion @litguru . You are right I should have developed that important part of the story. Perhaps unconsciously I left it for each reader to think about how it was that day, when Eliana's mother discovered that the ring had magical powers...
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I know what you mean. I like to give clues to the readers, so they can figure it out. It's a fine balance between saying too much or too little. It's always fun!