Mind-bending piece that reminds of a Philip K. Dick-type world.
the beauty of the yellow edged flames mesmerised her into inactivity.
I liked the imagery of the burning cottage on the sand dune. It had a beautiful and surreal quality to it. It's also a good hook to draw the reader further into the mystery. Very suspenseful.
Who is the mysterious man? She mentions her father, but the stranger doesn't sound like him. Are they in a virtual world? So many questions. Spooky and mysterious! 👀
It’s so interesting that everyone seems to see this as 👻 spooky 🤔
To be fair, there is no story until there’s a reader to interpret it. Then the words take on a life of their own, so that each person can put their own spin on it and get something out of it?? 🙃🙃
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For me the spookiness comes from the nonchalant demeanor of the figure at the end. As if he knows a secret. But I could be totally wrong. :)
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