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In the heart of a quiet city was a man named Adrian. A bit of an outsider, keeping mostly to himself. His eyes were always filled with emotion, and he rarely shared what he was feeling with others.
Years ago, Adrian had been deeply in love, but that love had ended in heartbreak. Now, the memories of that love were like a vice, holding him captive and preventing him from moving on.
No matter how hard he tried, he couldn't escape the past. The memories of his former love haunted him; like a shadow, they followed him everywhere.
Adrian's story was one of those stories about love so pure that it defied words. Lily had been more than a wife to him. She had been his other half, the one who understood him in a way no one else could. Together, they had created a bond so strong that it felt like nothing could ever break it. Unfortunately, like a bolt from the blue, the unthinkable happened. Their love was ripped apart, and now Adrian's soul is in tatters. Now, he feels like he's adrift and lost in a sea of confusion and grief.
Every morning, as the sunlight poured through his window, Adrian would wake up to the haunting memories of what he had lost. The laughter of his beloved, the soft caress of her touch, and her soft voice were all hunting memories. He would sit up in bed and feel the weight of these memories pressing down on him.
In the afternoon, Adrian spent his days wandering the streets of the city, always looking lost. The very streets they had once strolled down, hand in hand, now seemed empty. The city itself was now a symbol and a constant reminder of what he had lost. It seemed as if the world had turned against him, taunting him with the reminder of what he had once had and what he had lost.
The only thing that kept him going was the hope that someday, somehow, he would be able to break free from the chains of the past. One day, he would be able to find a way to move on and not miss her anymore. He longed for that day. But for now, all he could do was stick with the ghosts of his past trailing behind him.
Night after night, he hid himself in a bar, trying to find solace in a bottle of cold beer. The weight of beer filling his stomach offered a brief fill to the hollow within him.
One night, as he sat at the bar, the strains of a familiar melody filled the air. That particular song was like a dagger to his heart; it evoked memories of a night he had tried so hard to forget. It was the night that his world had been shattered—the night when everything had changed and Lily had been taken from him. As the song continued to play, Adrian's heart began to ache with the weight of his loss. He felt like he was being pulled back to that fateful night.
Gradually, tears welled up in Adrian's eyes as he listened to the haunting lyrics of the song playing. It was ' I Drove all Night by Celine Dion.' It was the same song that had filled their car on that ill-fated evening when he and his wife Lily drove back home. He remembers it like it was yesterday.
"What are you trying to do?" he had asked Lily as she struggled with the car radio.
"I'm trying to play our song," she replied, smiling as she continued tuning the radio.
And in a few seconds, the lyrics of the song filled their car as they sang along.
He was so lost in the moment that he didn't see the incoming vehicle at the intersection. And that was the genesis of his present predicament. He had blamed himself ever since.
He broke down in silent sobs, his tears blending with the rain that had begun to fall outside the bar. The memories of that tragic accident—the screeching of tires, the shattering of glass, and the loss of his beloved wife—came flashing back to his face with so much intensity he couldn't bear.
Adrian quickly but unsteadily rose from his seat, resting his weight on his good foot; the other foot had gone numb after the accident. He struggled to regain his balance, and his legs trembled beneath him. Slowly, he limped towards the exit, his vision blurry with tears, his heart heavy like a stone, burdened by the weight of his grief and guilt.
But before he could reach the door, his legs gave way, and he collapsed onto the floor. As people rushed to his aid. An ambulance was called, and Adrian was whisked away to the hospital.
Adrian never fully healed from the pain again. The accident had not only claimed his wife's life but had also left him emotionally scarred and broken. He "missed" his wife Lily, and he "missed" his former life with Lily present.
In his quest to escape the torment of his past, Adrian sought a life of solitude. He became a monk and dedicated himself to a life of silence and meditation. To him, the serenity of the monastery offered a respite from the noise of the world, and the silence that enveloped him felt like a warm embrace. For the first time in a long time, he felt at peace.
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Emotional 😢.
He chose the perfect way to pull out from the cage of his late wife's memories. Monk's style of living keep off from women with regular deep Meditations
He chose what's best for him. Thank you for reading bro.
Whaoo
At first, I thought she left him for another man and then again, I thought if the bond was so strong why would she leave him alone.
But after the scene of the accident, it pricks my heart that Adrian was left alone in this world without his beloved lily.
There is no one who wouldn’t miss their beloved
He misses her more than words can describe. Thank you for reading.
You’re welcome 🥹🥹
This is lovely. I love the setting, and all. The pains were greatly felt and you did awesomely well with your character.
I just thought of doing something emotional this time. Thank you for reading
You are welcome 😊.
An incredibly sad story, @marriot5464. To lose one's life partner negligently at ones' own hands is tragic indeed. You paint a picture of complete despair in grief. I did, however, find this a little heavy on the emotive narrative. Sometimes less makes more of an impact. His decision to become a monk in the end also felt rather sudden and unexpected. Good fiction requires balance, and it would have elevated your story if you had injected more conversation and action into the piece. It needed something to drive the story forward.
Thank you for writing in The Ink Well. We look forward to reading more of your stories.
I became very emotional when I read through the accident scene. Losing a loved one out of negligence can be traumatizing and haunting. I am glad that he got a way out of it by becoming a Monk.
Wow!!! This was so so great, I could feel his pains
Good job mate!
Your story is very sad because Adrian could not bear the loss of the loved one and even more the feeling of guilt. It is hard to live like that but he got peace of mind.
I really liked the way you wrote it.
Regards @marriot5464 ⚘
really interesting, I spent a good time read it. well job
Thank you.