Wow, now that I read your comment, I think I was able to get more out of the story and that there were some loose threads. I think this time two things worked for me: in my country we are suffering from power cuts and I had to make a not so long story so that I could publish on time. And the other is that in my country there is a belief that there are “goblins” that try to take children away. But now that I read your suggestions, I think I could even make a second part with this story. Thanks for the ideas, friends.
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