I certainly read this text since you published it and I left it pending to comment, oh... but I don't know, life got complicated for me. I agree with the recommendations made to you. These are very good. I also felt like you could exploit this jealousy conflict between the two brothers.
However, your writing is very good. You know I like reading you.
Sorry for the delay...
Well, no rush! Thanks for steping by! It's never too late, as the saying goes 😉