Very good story. It has a lot of suspense with children alone in houses, in a storm and no light. I loved Bob's bravery. The ending surprised me with the kittens crying, poor things. The person who was banging on the door wanted to help them or wasn't it ?
You left me with a question mark😏
Regards my friend @fantom22
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@popurri Perhaps my simple genre is not understood by many readers in other countries, obviously, when I write about the kittens at the end, it should be understood that there was no one at the windows and doors.
In the horror of that night, the cat itself was crying out of labour pain and wanted to come inside the house and was clawing at the doors and windows, it was only her cries that the children assumed like a woman's voice.
thanks for reading and commenting,
Your friend.