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RE: Transferred Again

in The Ink Well4 years ago

Oh man, that was a really good story. I loved the vague description of her mental illness without trying to give away what it was or becoming to specific. I also found the depictions of the characters very realistic.
This was a fantastic, detailed, albeit sad story. Knowing someone who's suffering from mental problems, tales like this always hit close to him.
Great read!

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I am glad that you liked the story even without a detailed explanation about Cassie's condition. Thanks for reading.

No problem, I think it made the story more interesting. I feel that writers often tell a bit too much or are to quick throwing words and conditions around and thus ruining things. Your descriptions, however, were perfect in showing that something was wrong with her.

I truly appreciate this.
Yeah, I often like leaving readers with either suspense or making them hit their world of imagination as well.
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