Hah, you got me good with this one, fantastic end!
I also loved the way you presented the dialogue. It's hard work making dialogue work without exposition and let it carry the story. Well done, I enjoyed it a lot and the revelation at the end!
Hah, you got me good with this one, fantastic end!
I also loved the way you presented the dialogue. It's hard work making dialogue work without exposition and let it carry the story. Well done, I enjoyed it a lot and the revelation at the end!