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RE: The Ink Well Prompt #17: Action, Dialogue, Narrative | She Lost It

in The Ink Well4 years ago

Hahahaha the story shouldn't make me laugh, but it just reminded me of an event with an ex-girlfriend. Something similar but with books. Books or me, something like that.

Only the story is her or the cat. I liked how it starts out opening up a lot of possibilities for the story, then gives you little details to give you an idea of what's going on. And at the end you're left in suspense, thinking she killed the cat. Only to be surprised that it was a life lesson.

Very good indeed.

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Hi, @ricardo993!

I guess it's kind of funny what happened, since at least there were no dead to mourn and, apparently, Ethan got what he deserved (or almost did).
I really appreciate your reading. Thank you very much :)