A very interesting story. I liked how you keep the reader in suspense as the plot develops. The narration in the present tense gives the story dramatic agility and emotion. Very good work.
Thanks for sharing your story with us.
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Thank you very much @rinconpoetico7 for the comment. I'm glad you liked my story and I'm glad I managed to keep the suspense, that's what I intended to do.
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