ooh... a tighter finish, leaving the reading hanging... interesting... I like it! Something to ponder for future pieces. I have already learned a bit from reading writers like yourself. I'm learning to tighten... but yeah I think I let it go right near the end if I reread it. After it was published I came up with a couple of different sentences to close the piece that I feel would have been stronger... I may edit it down the line with a clear alternative ending.
haha enjoy the cleaning! Hopefully the toilet and the oven aren't categorised in the same part of your brain as my writing... lol... the latter may take a lot more time to fix 😂😂😂 !LUV !LOLZ
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