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RE: Big Wide Blue | The Ink Well Prompt #14: Railroad

in The Ink Well4 years ago

This is a wonderful example of how to introduce multiple characters into a single story. As gently and as expertly as possible. I actually might just go through my old comments again to find someone I once talked about this on her/his post, so I could point them in this direction.

Great story, attention grabbing at the start especially because of the vivid details. One almost feels as though they're there with the protagonist.

Altogether, a wonderful use of the prompt. Cheers!

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Thanks so much for the feedback @seesladen :) Appreciate the thoughts!

@seesladen: Your structural analysis not only reinforces the writer's efforts, but also may help others to understand why this story succeeds. Thank you!