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RE: The Ink Well Fast and Furious Festival - Day 1

Good work on task 1.

I felt that it was not a description of characters, but a story that enthralls the life of those characters. The first part I loved the second part I missed a little bit.

On task 2.

I liked the dialogue but again I had the perception that it was long, so I went to check with a word counter 🙈 and it has 98. I don't know how he does it but I felt like I was reading a story.

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Thanks so much for your thoughtful feedback, @soyunasantacruz. You're right. I am able to write in story fashion, but writing a character's traits in a paragraph of description is hard for me! That's funny that you checked my dialog word count. Yes, I checked it too. Ha ha. I wanted to make sure I kept inside the limits.