I am new to this genre so expect mess up from me as far fiction writing is concerned. So nice of you for reading and your feedback kindly :)
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I am new to this genre so expect mess up from me as far fiction writing is concerned. So nice of you for reading and your feedback kindly :)
I have a feeling @yuki-nee means the story is messed up because of the underlying plot, and it's crazy that a man would hire killers to murder his wife. In other words, I don't think she was criticizing your writing. :-).