A very intriguing story, if not a bit mess up. But then again, all crime of passion were messed so I guess it's not that strange that George had his wife murdered so that he could be with another woman.
A very intriguing story, if not a bit mess up. But then again, all crime of passion were messed so I guess it's not that strange that George had his wife murdered so that he could be with another woman.
I am new to this genre so expect mess up from me as far fiction writing is concerned. So nice of you for reading and your feedback kindly :)
I have a feeling @yuki-nee means the story is messed up because of the underlying plot, and it's crazy that a man would hire killers to murder his wife. In other words, I don't think she was criticizing your writing. :-).