Hello @aloysiusmbaba,
In this piece you seem to have lost track of the guidelines for creative nonfiction. Please review those, as stated in the prompt post. As that post suggests, in drafting creative nonfiction you ought to use the same techniques that you would use in a piece of fiction: character development, arc, dialogue, etc. It should almost read like a story, except it's not a story. It's real.
This blog is more like an essay. It is clear and well written, but it is not creative nonfiction.
Thank you.