You create an interesting character in this story, @blackalbino. However this follows closely upon your story entered in the August contest. We will allow this misunderstanding on this one occasion, but the rule about once a week is rather fixed. We are sure you understand.
While you handle the action well in this story, there is a little lack of continuity with the flashback. Flashbacks/time sequences that take us to the past are hard to finesse, so you do pretty good job with that.
Thank you for sharing this story with us!