before publishing it in the community. Curation rewards are unfortunately impacted when writers don't take the time to do this. Your story would also have been elevated if there had been some foreshadowing of what the Palmist later revealed to the two women.Hello @coolbabe88. This was an interesting story which would have been better if you had taken the time to edit it. There were too many spelling mistakes, issues with mixed tenses, punctuation (including lack of speech marks), and repeated phrases. It became too distracting to enjoy the story fully. Most of these are easy fixes. In The Ink Well we require our writers to focus on quality submissions and this means that they take the time to proof read their work and edit it with Grammarly or Google Docs