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RE: Swirl of Emotions

in The Ink Well2 years ago

Many of us feel guilty when looking back at the circumstances that ended a close friendship, you have done well to express the dimensions of this relatable experience.

This story is nice, however by adding in some of the creative elements of fiction, it would really shine! We recommend reading our article on creative nonfiction for tips on adding these details into your stories. We hope this feedback helps! Thank you for sharing your story with us, and for your engagement with other members of the community.