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RE: AYO’S DILEMMA

in The Ink Well3 years ago

You give Ayo a classic conflict. There is temptation, then there is his conscience. There is need, and then there is awareness of consequence. As Ayo goes through the different possible outcomes, he is conflicted. In the end, his righteous behavior is rewarded when he sees the relieved party at the police station. This is a very good character sketch.

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