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RE: "Where there is life, there is hope"

in The Ink Well11 months ago

hope prompt was the fiction prompt for this week. Having said this, it was touching to read a post filled with such gratitude and appreciation for your mom. I'm glad that the two of you managed to persevere and that you have now completed your University education. Congratulations!hello @huncho124. This read like a true story from your life. Please be careful to write correctly for the prompts as the

Your submission would benefit from a spellcheck, and grammar and punctuation edit. There are some exceptionally long sentences which combine numerous thoughts in a long string of words, making it a challenge to read and not giving the reader a chance to take a breath. If you want to improve your writing, please focus on editing your work before publishing.

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Thank you for the observation.