This must have been an incredibly difficult time in your life, not knowing when you were going to be able to eat again, and being responsible for your siblings. Then receiving a message like that from your Mom must have been devastating. I found it a little hard to relate to your story only because the context was missing. There was no backstory shared as to why your family was in this position or what age you or your siblings were at the time. There was also no resolution showing how you managed to survive, because clearly you did! I was left with so many questions and wanting so much more from it...
A couple more points on formatting and grammar. Centred text does not work for fiction - it's harder on the eye to read, distracting and disconcerting. It takes away from the experience. Text justified to the left and made to fit margin to margin makes for much better presentation. I am also confused as to why you would use capital letters for some of your siblings and lower case for others and for Mrs Ogbolu. It's inconsistent and grammatically incorrect.
This had the potential to be a great #CNF. More focus on fully developing your story next time would definitely elevate your pieces.
Thank you for the corrections, I will do better next time