Your story is charming, but perhaps a bit murderous. So much murder is not really consistent with Ink Well culture. It is true there are no graphic representations of murder here, there is no overt abuse, so the story passes. Still, it is problematic for the community. See if you can tone it down in the future.
Thank you for writing for the Ink Well. Are you engaging with other writers in the community? We expect that of our authors. This helps others to develop their skills and also encourages them to keep writing. Thank you!
For me it wasn't that murderous, I mean, Star Wars have many blaster scenes and its still considered family friendly, guess everyone has a different interpretation.
I made sure to never add blood to any of my pictures, I wouldn't want to disturb other readers in such a way.
Sorry for causing such problems here.
Sure! I'll try to completely mute bloodshedding details in my future stories!