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RE: Fiction: Smell of wood ( Eng - Esp)

in The Ink Well11 months ago

What a charming story, @lrscarmen. It was wonderful to read how the family came together to help Antonio, and how he was able to overcome his disability and thrive.

One tip: Be sure to break up your stories into paragraphs. It is very challenging to read when it is all one block of words without and breaks.

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Hi, @theInkwell, thanks for your suggestions.