hello @maiasun84
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Just a few pointers...
Please ensure that you provide image sourcing for any images that you use. I suspect that the image in this post is one that you have drawn yourself. We would just need to you to add that it is your own hand-drawn artwork and then you can add inspired by...etc etc.
I assume you wrote the piece in Spanish and then translated it? Can you advise which translator you used? I don't think it did your story justice and wanted to recommend that you use Deepl.com in future as it is very good at capturing the nuances of a story in translation. I re-translated your story using Deepl and it made a huge difference! The value of the curation on this piece would have been higher if you had used it. Kindly also state at the foot of each story, which language version is the translation and which translation software you used. I would love to see what further stories you can bring us.
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Again, welcome!
Thank you very much for these recommendations.
Yes, the image belongs to me, it is part of my work as a titiritera, of an audiovisual show about this same text that I share with you.
As for the translator, I am very happy to recommend some specific.I really didn't feel anything at ease with which I used.
I apologize for not complying with all the rules of the community.I will take them into account for upcoming publications.
I thank you again.