Nicely done, @marlyncabrera. You've captured the complexity of relationships, and how difficult communications and understanding can be between two people.
...she added that she had long been offended that he had only given her a drawer and a slot for her toothbrush, while the cat had a room and a couch to himself; but mostly, she was angry that he was fine with her being furious about it.
This is a pivotal detail, and it sheds light on the depth of the inequities that doom the relationship. Great job with the story prompt and including the important story elements of action, dialog and narrative!
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Thanks, @theinkwell. When we use the three elements stories turn more real.It is not easy, however, to decide what to put in the dialogues so they help the story flow naturally.