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RE: Heart attack? (ESP/ENG)

in The Ink Well4 years ago

Adam is certainly a nasty, disturbed character. Actually, pathological. Of course he won't get away with it. He is out of his mind and will continue to behave erratically.

It was hard to understand some parts of the story. For example, why a syphilis test by Cody if he does not have syphilis? Also, even though Cody doesn't ask questions, impersonating someone at a laboratory is a rather big deal. It is hard for the reader to believe anyone would do this, even an obliging person.

You have given us the outline of an obsessive personality with malevolent inclinations. We understand this character very well, and also know such people do exist.

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Yes, he is certainly sick and bad. And very easy to manipulate people.

The exam was to justify pricking August' arm, in case he was examined by forensics. And he took advantage of his position within the clinic to send Cody to a lab.

It was easier for Adam to ask to be tested for sexually transmitted diseases than for any other clinical pathology that might get him in trouble. He was a very meticulous man when it came to that.

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