You have created for us a story that parallels the arc of many myths. An immortal falls in love with a mortal and the divine rule forbids the love. Actually, the story of forbidden love is as old as the human race. You give us the tragic consequence of such a love. One can wish to defy the norm, but in the end, defiance often is not a path to success. Jossie was nowhere to be found and we suspect this will be the circumstance going into the future.
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